The door slammed

I.A.L.T upload my writing task and write about them.

Last week for writing the class had got a sheet that had a 
sentence on it. Our sentence was the door slammed. We had to write the noun (who or what) and adjective (describe the noun)
verb or adverb (what did they do and now) and also where
(where did it happen). After that we had to write a sentence about it using the noun,adjective,verb or adverb and where. 

Here is a photo of mine

 










I really enjoyed it and all you had to do is describe the door slammed. What do you think I can work on and will try to work on it better.