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Tuesday 2 April 2019

W.A.L.T write compound and and complex sentences

One day a little dear was walking in the wild she was lost in the wild she had no body by her and she  heard something and it was her sister coming to get her because it was time for a bath she had a bath in the tub then it was time to eat but they can not eat because they have not more food to eat the baby dear was hungry and scary because she needs to go into the wild
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous11 April 2019 at 08:57

    Good job Ataahua, Great high level writing. That deer looks so cute. Just remember to check that your writing makes sense.

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  2. Anonymous11 April 2019 at 09:22

    Hi there Ataahua that was amazing but the only thing I think you should work on is your punctuation.
    Other than that the post is great.

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