Explanation Writing

W.A.L.T write an explanation piece of writing

How do bees make honey?

Bees have to fly about 90’000 miles-three times around the globe to make

one pound of honey?

Bees collect nectar and flowers are in bloom. This is usually

 in spring. They use their straw like a tangle to suck the nectar 

Out.

 (How they return the nectar back to the hive .) They return 

when

 are full of nectar. They often wait until the night to go back to 

the hive.

To turn the nectar into honey they puke it into other workers' mouths and  other bees keep on doing this until they are finished. They dried it out by flapping their wings. They then put it into a honeycomb and then protect it with wax.

when the bees are done the beekeeper come and collect the honey and prepare it for selling .

I am very proud of all the detail I have included in my writing. I planned with Miss Thompson to ensure I had enough information to confidently write about the topic. I would like to work on 

my punctuation

My question is how long do  bees take  to make one pound of honey? 

How much is one pound of honey?
 and also how do they make the nectar into honey to sell what is your question for bees?

my hobbys

 

 my hobby.

I like to play outside on the tramp the tramp is my favourite place to go to because it is cool and i can do a back flip on my tramp. 
I like to go for walks with my mum and my baby sister and my big bother. I like to go fish and diving off the boat. 

our fav singers

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 our favourite singers

My favourite singer is Russ because he sings a lot of song these
are his songs. Russ was born on September 1992  and he is 27 years old Russ full name is Russ vitlae he is a cool singer and he is my favourite singer. He is from this his song  puss here 
Secaucus, New Jersey, United States.

• Ain't nobody taking my baby
• what they
• top ten songs 
• missin you crazy
• my baby
• 99
• ride slow
• best on earth
• pull the tirgger 
• goodbye
• Guess what 

My favourite song of Russ' is 'Aint nobody taking my baby' because i rember about my baby cuzse.

Reading

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TO Read book that we will read.

my fav book is girltopia i had red the hole book. This is read the boss girl and the girl hood  they are my fav book but my fav book is judy moody they are of a  is cool on the book she has 4 book these are my fav books because they are cool to read and thay are interesting  to read Judy Moody has one bother and three friends  sink,roikey,amin and also franky. Girltopia is cool but i did not get it.

goal setting

W.A.L.T how to set our goal setting.  

	Stretch Goal: What do I need to improve?	Strength Goal: What am I good at and want to further extend?
Specific What is my goal?	I will get better at spelling words.	I will get better at selecting books that I enjoy reading.
Measurable How will I know I’ve achieved my goal?	When I have less words spelt incorrectly in my writing book.	I will have achieved my goal when I enjoy most books I read.
Actions What do I do need to do to reach my goal?	I will  .Take home a notebook with spelling words  . Practise regularly.	I will:  Read the back of the book  Try reading books from the same author.
Realistic Am I able to achieve my goal?	I will achieve this goal because I will make time to practise.	I will achieve the goal because I will research into books I am in to.
Timebound Is my timeframe manageable?	I will achieve this goal by the end of term 1.	I will achieve this in 4 weeks

About my weekend

             W.A.L.T Write About our weekend.

on the weekend we were getting my birthday party all sorted. Because of my birthday is soon. GIRLS ONLY PARTY   

AND NO BOYS AND MEN 

ALLOWED. 

         

I CAN NOT WAIT FOR 

  IT TO
    COME.

We are reading about our Fav book

W.A.L.T read our fav book

Judy Moody it my fav book and movie. 

she has one bother her bother name

was James 

but the called him stink. its a very cool movie I think you should watch it.

Question have you ever watched judy moody?